Most of the students want to do some reading in the holidays. Books are the ladder of human progress. They think reading can give them more knowledge.
About sixty of us want to do sports. They will go skating and skiing .
As we are very busy in schooldays, we seldom do housework . Now we can help our parents do some housework.
A small number of us want to travel to the south, because it is warm.
I will make good use of the holidays to review my lessons. I want to catch up with my classmates in the new term.
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Great writing. I like your style, and if I can help, I have a little suggestions for you, hope to make your writing better. First, you almost have a perfect strucure, if you have a ending paragraph. the ending paragraph is more important than the beginning one, so you have to write it. Second, your word choice is fine, but it can be more diverse. I think you learned a lot of them so far, so try to shift one another. Third, good luck and be confident. If you want a score, let's suppose you do the first writing okay, you can get a 24
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