How beautiful the snow is !
Taday,it is little cold so that i wear my coat before i go out .When i leave home,i am attracted by the scene---it snows. The trees and ground which are in our flat are coverred with snow,which are very purity.i am very glad to see the snow ,so i can not wait to be close to it.i run in the world which is full of snow .The snow bring the world quiet ,and bring me happiness.
I speed a lot of time playing in the 'white world',thongh it is cold,i am still surprised to get alone with the snow.Thank to the snow for make me have a happy day . i love the snow .
我的英语不算很好,里面可能有错误,你参考一下吧。你可以把一般现在时,改为一般过去时。
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