Our English Teacher
We have an English teacher.(注意标点符号)Her name is XXX.We call(时态) her Miss Wei.
Miss Wei is strict with us.And she goes over our(老师不喜欢作文中出现类似sb. sth. one's这样的词,不正规) homework everyday.She often encourages (时态)everybody.She tells(文章整体都用现在时,所以用现在时就可以) us,“You should study hard.”
We all like Miss Wei.
one"s改为ours
encourage改为encourages
tell 改为 tells
第二段的called改为call
第三段的one's改为our;everyday改为every day;encourage改为encourages
第四段的tell改为told。