求帮忙修改这篇英语作文,谢谢!

2025-05-17 07:26:54
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回答1:

第一句应该是are
第二句有语法错误 第一段的一些词与词之间没有空格
第二段第四句有语法错误He gathered some friends, theycame to the train station, saved a lot of prisoners.
Wallenberg is a really brave and cleverman, he did something that others afraid to do, and succeeded
I think this is Wallenberg’s heroism, a person is also a life, it’snot how many he save, it’s the love of life.
都是一样的错误

第三段 He stuck to...那里有错的
he was aiming too high...修改一下吧,有点看不懂
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我发现你最常见的一个语法错误就是你的一个句子,实际上往往包含了好几个句子。