二楼说的对。
应该这么说:
Mr.Wang, a native in Beijing,has become a successful businessman in New York.
这里 a native in Beijing作一个非限制性定语来说明王先生是一个地道的北京人。而MR Wang has become……才是句子主干。
一个句子哪里两个动词?反正错一踏糊涂,改都不好改
Mr wang后面不能再接一个主谓结构,应该把he改为who或that引导的定语从句修饰主语.
Mr.Wang who is a native in Beijing has become a successful businessman in New York
Mr.Wang, a native in Beijing,has become a successful businessman in New York.
he要改who才行,作为非限制性定语从句的引导词。